Aw, DrVic! Always love hearing from you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I also know you’re a puzzler, so did you see I have another one in my poem a constant state of yearning?
ffs T ... I knew you would annihilate me.. and you have .. and I can't stop listening. the visions your voice conjures.. and when you speak Italian Catholic prayers in a poem about such wet sinful pleasure... well I can't even say publicly what it does to me. Signore, abbi pieta. thank you. xxx
No. no I *loved* it.. humbled to have inspired this in any way.. the scene so vivid in my mind.. it will become something I toy with .. turn within, no doubt more will bloom from this piece. it lives..
your instincts are on point, Sir.. Sicilian blood running through these veins.. when you speak so perfectly I fall apart. it's ancient and timeless and every slain sinner.... I imagine recording erotica over your voice running in the background.. reciting prayers in Italian like a holy blasphemous chant .. Jesus could you imagine .. now you must forgive me. Xx
Siciliana… ma ora tutto è chiaro. This gives me such a deep new perspective… a whole other layer now. This speaks volumes to me! The beauty, the violence, the passion of the island shines through in your words.
This is so hot! 🔥. I adore this line: "She is Peitho and Siren wrapped in flesh so lush and desirable." I'm in awe of your talent.
Thank you so much! The awe is mutual!
This is great🔥
Aw, DrVic! Always love hearing from you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I also know you’re a puzzler, so did you see I have another one in my poem a constant state of yearning?
glorious 🌹❤️🔥
ffs T ... I knew you would annihilate me.. and you have .. and I can't stop listening. the visions your voice conjures.. and when you speak Italian Catholic prayers in a poem about such wet sinful pleasure... well I can't even say publicly what it does to me. Signore, abbi pieta. thank you. xxx
So very happy you liked it. It wouldn’t take a formal literary analysis to see it was inspired by your style of writing.
And I’m not sure why… but I’ve had a feeling you might be paisana… forgive me if I’m mistaken. T xx
No. no I *loved* it.. humbled to have inspired this in any way.. the scene so vivid in my mind.. it will become something I toy with .. turn within, no doubt more will bloom from this piece. it lives..
your instincts are on point, Sir.. Sicilian blood running through these veins.. when you speak so perfectly I fall apart. it's ancient and timeless and every slain sinner.... I imagine recording erotica over your voice running in the background.. reciting prayers in Italian like a holy blasphemous chant .. Jesus could you imagine .. now you must forgive me. Xx
Siciliana… ma ora tutto è chiaro. This gives me such a deep new perspective… a whole other layer now. This speaks volumes to me! The beauty, the violence, the passion of the island shines through in your words.
you are gorgeous X the way you see with your passion.. touch with your poetry. the beauty and the violence x